This week for my blog I am going to be talking about a very important issue in today’s society which is gang violence. This is very big because a lot of people injured and potentially killed because these gangs. These big gangs are approaching homeless people and their family and people who are needy and don't live in safe areas and hurting them. I was reading a family that lost their fifteen year old daughter due to gang violence. They celebrated her birthday by her grave. That is very sad this woman has other children and that child that died was her children’s big sister. My aunt is a LAPD Lieutenant for the gang violence department and she is constantly talking about the sad things and stories she hears. She says it is very heart breaking. Overall is very very said how these gangs are just killing people with no remorse and it seems that people are not going to stop. They are killing old people young children they do not care who they kill. Sometimes they kill people because either they do not want to join their gang and they kill them because they do not get what they want. It super super sad to think about they are just killing people which is very sad over all it is very sad. These gangs think they are privileged and they think that they can kill who ever they want and they will be no repercussions. It is just truly sad what is happening under our noses and near our homes and just a few miles away. Gangs are just doing very bad things and it is just overall sad and making me mad just talking about it because people are getting killed and these gangs have no remorse nighther do they care about it because they could care less. Overall it is just very sad and these gangs should just stop and not kill people anymore because it is just 100% just wrong and very very very very sad. They should just stop right now. http://www.lapdonline.org/get_informed/content_basic_view/1396
This week for my blog I am going to talk about tags. Tags are the adjectives we use at the end of dialogue in writing giving the reader a better description of the character’s dialect and tone. Tags are very important because they add a level of description that you just can’t get anywhere else. Tags are important because it will make your writing sound more educated and interesting. In class we are currently making a narrative about a monster that is misunderstood. Then later one we will make a model of our monster. For this reason that is why the essay needs to have tags in order for it to be descriptive. It needs to be extra descriptive because of the fact that we are going to make it into a monster. While reading the essay you need a lot of tags to make it descriptive in order to get a very very detailed picture in your head on what the monster looks like. That is why tags are very important because they add a lot of description along with a better sense and picture in your head of what the character sounds and looks like along with their dialect. What they sound like perhaps they have an accent perhaps they have a funny dialect to figure those things out the reader needs to get a better picture of the personality of the character that is talking through there dialect and the tags that are being used to define them and the appearance along with their personality. That is why it is very important to have many different tags in you writing. A few great tags would be exclaimed, shouted, muttered, said, acknowledged, admitted, nagged, questioned, retorted, sang, etc. In conclusion for those reasons that is whey should use more tags in your writing. http://www.readwritethink.org/files/resources/lesson_images/lesson291/dialogue_tag.pdf |
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